WALT:write a narritive

Plopey is a super hero who whizzes around and helps people that need help.

She has very long hair that is blonde coloured and she also cries like a baby.

 Plopey has a very long tail and breathes out icebergs.  At the mountains was a

very creepy place to be.  Bats hanging out of the tree and green gooey slime on

the ground you could not get over to the snow gooey yuck snow.

One yucky gooey morning Plopey got out of bed and drove through the Nobody road that nobody liked going there because zombies were all over the place. Scary said crickey to Plopey.  Crickey is Plopey pet bird that always helps Plopey.

After they drove through the nobody road they drove in the forest of evil Plopey thought it was the scariest place to go through.

They were trying to find the naughty dragon fire bird that stole the huge door to the house.  Oh no Plopey said.

They found the naughty dragon that stole the huge door but suddenly he said

that he was nice and he said can I be your pet said the dragon OK said Plopey

as long as you give the door back.   Thank you. They lived happily ever after.

                                                      THE END

WALT: improve on our best efforts

I can improve on on my best efforts by.

1. speaking clearly
2. helping

WALT learn to summarise

Get Some Sleep!  By Vickie An

Are you tired during the day? Do you have trouble focusing? Do you feel like a grouch? If so, you might not be getting enough sleep.

On weekday mornings, Jeilun Liao, 8, wakes up around 7:40 a.m. He brushes his teeth and gets dressed. Then he heads to class at P.S. 124 Yung Wing School, in New York City.

Jeilun gets between eight and 10 hours of sleep a night. On most nights, he has a hard time falling asleep. Waking up in the morning isn't easy for this fourth grader. "I don't want to get out of bed," Jeilun says. "I'm so tired."

Jeilun is not alone. Kids across the U.S. aren't getting enough sleep. Experts say children ages 5 to 12 should get 10 to 11 hours of sleep each night. But according to the National Sleep Foundation, kids are only sleeping an average of nine and a half hours a night. An extra 30 minutes of slumber may not seem like a lot. But it can make a big difference for kids and their learning..

Summary

8 year old Jeilun Liao wakes up at 7.00am most mornings before heading to work in New York City.

Most nights he only gets 8 hours sleep because he finds it difficult to get to sleep after watching TV. He never wants to get up in the mornings.

Children aren’t getting enough sleep. All children need 11 hours of sleep every second night so they are ready for learning.

My Summary

8 year old Jeilun Laio  finds it hard to sleep.He wakes up at 7.40am before heading to school in New York City.Jeilun only has eight to ten hours of sleep every night but kids should have 11 hours of sleep.He finds it hard to sleep and wake up.
                       By Zoe Croton

Inquiry sample

Inquiry Sample

Term 4, 2010

Middle Magic

Our Big Question

How can we be kind to others?

????? …… My Wonderings …. ?????

1.  Why do we be kind to others?

2.  how can we be kind to others?

3.  I wonder… if Miss b would give us each a loppop each day?

My Ideas for Random Acts of Kindness

• write a card
• say why you like them
• if they are new to school show them around
• ask if they want to play with you if they are by them sevles 

                                                     BY ZOE CROTON

 

WALT know our knowledge

WALT write an argument

WALT know our time

WALT learn our spelling

WALT learning our basic facts

 

WALT write quickly and neatly.

our plants

                                                            what we did              
we all learnt how to make a pot out of newspapper and then put our seeds into our pots and we did it outside.after that we  water our plants.
                                       what we did next
we will plant them outside in the dirt.
                                       what we learnt

we learnt to take care of our plants.

mayhem at the mueseum

Plus
1 learn not to be shy
 2 learn more dance steps
 3 playing time
4 dancing on stage

Minus
1dancing with boys
2dressing room was squahed
3staying up late and getting tired
4its inbarssing

ideas
1cool production
2 lots of  leavers

My goals

My goals are to:

1. keep trying 
2. don't give up
3. sitting still

This term my goal is to: 

Fiddling on the mat.